RESEARCH SCENARIO, PART 2

This paper has good research backing it, however, the manner it's presented takes away all interest. I can observe an attempt to create suspense, but it falls short immediately when a witness says that creationism was only being compared to evolution on a page. As well, the article dragged on by mismatching subjects, or dragging on a story that should have been only one page long. There is a bit of conflict between the controversial, but proven statement that creationism shouldn't be taught in schools and classic literature, however, the boring tone they write it in hurts their interest integrity as well. Unfortunately at the end, there is a mention of challenging churches to pit their religion to science. This would have increased the conflict, and would have been a much more worthy article to write about.